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H1N1 report during the week of September 20-26, 2009
Cause (introduction):
Each of the weeks the CDC, Center of Disease Control and prevention will publish the result of finding of key flu indicators and review the weekly influenza activities. During the week of September, 20-26, the report showed the tendency of having a swine flu among people has elevated in the United States, here are the indicators posted by the organization:
Effects (indicators, body paragraph):
1. Topic sentences:
· Influenza-like illness has continuously visiting the doctor.
Supporting details:
· What kind of symptom that influenza-like illness has
· Some of the bad habits will cause potential illness
2. Topic sentences:
· Total rate of hospitalization of the United State increased a lot.
Supporting details:
· Data
· Doctor’s comments
3. Topic sentences:
· Although the mortality relate to H1N1 flu have not be seen so much, however, 11 out of 60 of the pediatric death on swine flu were reporting this week.
Supporting details:
· From where the data of death relate to H1N1 reported
· Those places should be thought for twice when decide to go
Conclusion:
· People should increase the awareness
· Precaution
Reference:
http://www.cdc.gov/h1n1flu/update.htm
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Yu, wait a minute. What is a cause in this outline? I cannot figure out what the cause is here, and I don't know the relationship between the disease and the effects. Is H1N1 the cause? Elaborate more, so I can see what you want to say.
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