Yuzhang1_ESL114M_compare&comtrast.doc
Compare and Contrast outline
Introduction:
Topic sentence:
· The Grading system between IB (International Baccalaureate) program and High school in China are different.
Supporting details:
· What is IB? What is it like in High School?
Body paragraph:
· Similarities:
They have same things account to the grade system, such as HW, quizzes, exam, etc.
· Differences:
1. General assignment (creative works, groups’ works)
2. Tests (is it the largest proportion in the whole grade?)
3. Other differences
(For example: internal assessment, external assessment, extended essay, etc.)
4. How do they calculate the grade (in number)?
Conclusion:
· The grading system of IB is fairer than grading system in China’s High School.
· Compare with IB grading system; give suggestion of the improvement of China’s grading system.
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Yu, I want you to work on this topic, but the outline needs to be changed before you start to write. Since grading is kind of too narrow to write a full paper, I'd like you to choose more general topic such as different education systems between the USA and China. Also, there's no thesis statement yet for the outline above, so don't forget to have a clear thesis in the introduction. I'm looking forward to seeing your improvement. Good luck!
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